thank you. I often try to create parallels and echoes all through a story, so I am glad that works for you!
(I also often try to end a story in such a way that the reader feels as though they are listening for one last echo that hasn't arrived yet. Possibly this means I am a jerk!)
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Date: 2009-05-20 03:15 pm (UTC)(I also often try to end a story in such a way that the reader feels as though they are listening for one last echo that hasn't arrived yet. Possibly this means I am a jerk!)