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laurajv ([personal profile] laurajv) wrote2009-05-18 01:33 pm
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FIC: "The Word for World Is--" ST:AOS. 1/1. Gen.

I think this fandom has eaten my brain.

The Word for World Is--



Humans would've named the planet New Earth and the places things like New Africa or New Russia. Vulcans did no such thing; they named the planet Vik: the well in the desert. They named the continents Ashv'cezh, Laktra, and Vrekasht: Revenge, Grief, and Outcast.



Spock moved his rook up three levels, and Kirk frowned. "About the Vulcan colony," he said, calculating his options.

"Yes?"

"You don't find those names...emotional?"

Spock raised his eyebrows. "They are Vulcan."

"No, I mean, of course they're Vulcan, but -- "

"Jim." Kirk held his breath; Spock so rarely used his name. Spock frowned at him. "The names are...consonant with Vulcan history and culture."


The highest mountain on Vik rose out of a long chain of rock along the coast of Laktra. The Vulcans did not give it a name. It was not Seleya-that-was, though the remaining Kohlinaru took up residence, though the course of the kahs-wan ran over its sides, though hired crafters and builders recreated the Hall of Ancient Thought under the direction of an aged Vulcan mason.



Kirk found her in the empty botany lab after her shift. She was carefully picking out scales on a Vulcan lute. "Lieutenant Uhura?"

"Captain?" Her face was carefully neutral; he'd annoyed her too many times at the Academy for her to like him, he thought.

"You're the closest of any of us to Spock."

Her hands stilled the strings. "Perhaps."

"I don't want to pry," he said, sitting down across from her. "But I need to know how he's doing." He tapped his temple. "In here."

She simultaneously flinched and relaxed. "How would you be doing, in his place?"

"I'd be recklessly destroying government property in an effort to prove my manliness."

"So what you do anyway."

He shook his head and grinned at her, rueful. "And I'd be having screaming nightmares while simultaneously denying I needed any help." He searched her face. "Unless I had someone who knew me too well to let me get away with that."

She nodded. "There's...some of that. He's getting better. Did you know, Captain, that the entire Vulcan race is mentally linked to some degree?"

Kirk frowned. "I did know, yes -- when so many of them died, it must have hurt like hell."

"I think so," she said. "Spock says -- he says the Vulcan crew get together, every few days, to touch minds. It helps them heal." She ran her fingers through the notes of the scale, almost absently.

"I'm surprised so many Vulcans stayed in Starfleet," Kirk said. "I thought they might all leave, to help rebuild."

"They're all young," she said, thoughtfully. "All of them; I think Spock's the eldest by a number of years. I've heard Vulcans judge adulthood differently than we do."


The Kohlinaru knew every carving on every wall, every echo in every room, and the name of every katra that had been lost to the winds when Vulcan died. They touched their fingers to the face of the aged mason, and to the faces of all the Vulcans working under her direction; the mason's swift hands drew out the plans for all her alien crew.

The mason also met with the Federation aid officer, for the Kohlinaru would not speak with him. "What do you do?" he asked, at their first meeting.

She turned her face upwards, lifted her arm, and pointed up the long slope to the site of the Hall. "I build on the mountain," she said.

"But what do you do?" he said, waving his padd at her. "I have to write down what you do, and what aid you need, and how you will use it."

She shrugged. "We are the people of the mountain, and the desert, and the well. I build on the mountain, the highest mountain of Vik, where Laktra meets the sea. Perhaps one day we will be a people of the sea, as well, but we will always need the mountain."




The two eldest Vulcan crewmembers -- eldest, but for Spock -- resigned their commissions abruptly, and took commercial transport to Vik. Kirk found the rest of them holding a small, quiet conference in a corner of the rec hall, with Spock standing a little apart, his arms crossed. "I am half-human," Kirk heard him say, with the mismatch of mouth and voice that meant Spock was speaking Vulcan; bless universal translators. He hovered, almost out of earshot, his translator set to maximum, and pretended to be engrossed in reading a padd. "I have been told by my counterpart that I will not be spared, but it will be some time."

The others ducked their heads. "I had forgotten your counterpart," Ensign Setep said. "I merely wished to know if you would consider relinquishing any claim on my family; we have three women of age but would prefer they be free to wed at any time. Of course, if there is one of them you would take, my clan-head would be honored, but --"

Spock shook his head. "No need, Setep."

Setep closed his eyes. "We have all lost much. I did not wish our clan to breach contract-- "

"Your family owes the House of Surak no obligation but what it owes to all our people. There are so few of us; I would not hold anyone back from a productive arrangement. I am sure my father and my clan-head would agree."

All of them were silent, for a time, and Kirk was about to click off the padd and depart, when another -- Lieutenant T'Mit, he thought -- said "It is the month of the blood-mountain, when the watcher is blind. I have arranged to hold a room for us, for a week, for the meditations of blood. I will send a message for scheduling." She paused. "I have no knife."

"I have two," Setep said. "One of bone, one of steel. I will loan you the steel for the duration."

"This one is grateful," she answered, and the meeting broke apart.



Vik was a wetter world than Vulcan, with several oceans and many rivers, but the colonists showed little interest. When asked, all they would say is "The well weeps for those who cannot."

They built five villages, scattered over the continents, and began cataloguing the flora and fauna of their new home. Every village was within sight of a mountain, and surrounded by desert, and centered around a well.

From the mountains they quarried rock and built arenas in the deserts; in each arena they hung bells and a gong. "It will suffice," they said, "for now," and touched each others' faces in reassurance.




Kirk reached out and flicked Spock's king over. Spock caught it before it fell from the board. "You're distracted tonight," Kirk said, and Spock sighed.

"Yes."

"Woman trouble, or Vulcan trouble?"

"Why must it be either of those options?"

"Because I'm your CO, and I know it's not professional trouble. That leaves only woman trouble, or Vulcan trouble."

Spock fidgeted with his king, then set it down on the table with a thump. "My counterpart is an unsettling individual."

Kirk laughed. "He is that. What's he done?"

"He married." Kirk could hear a strange undercurrent in Spock's voice.

"He married, and...?"

"And he forced the Council to agree that my father could leave me unmarried until I chose my own mate."

"And that's unsettling because....?"

Spock looked faintly aggrieved. "How did he know I wished to find my own mate? I did not even know, until Vulcan was destroyed."

"He's you," Kirk said.

"He is not," said Spock. "He is someone I might have been, with a life very different from the one I am living now."

Kirk started setting up the chess pieces for a new game. "So think of him as a strangely prescient cousin. You're black this time."

"I also do not understand," said Spock, "how someone whose experience and political ties exist solely in another reality forced the Council to agree to anything."

Kirk grinned. "Look," he said, "would you want to mess with that guy? I sure wouldn't. I bet T'Pau took one look at him and went weak in the knees just from the vibes he gives off."

"I find that exceedingly unlikely."


The House of Surak made its home in the village nearest the unnamed mountain. The Federation aid officer stood at the well, with Sarek of Vulcan at his side. "What will you name this village?" he asked. "New ShiKahr?"

Sarek raised one eyebrow, and looked across the central square to where T'Pau stood, speaking with his other-son. "We do not name as humans name," he said. "This is Heya, city of the mountain."

"But all your settlements are near mountains," the aid officer said.

"Only one is near this mountain," Sarek answered. "Come, I will show you the school; it is nearly complete."




end.

A/N: Diane Duane's use of mountains in Spock's World was an enormous influence on this story.

The Vulcan vocabulary is all Modern Standard Vulcan, somewhat loosely translated. The most complete Vulcan dictionary online that I know of is http://www.starbase-10.de/vld/
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[personal profile] raven 2009-05-30 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
This is stunning. My god, this is just beautiful. Thank you.
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[personal profile] beatrice_otter 2009-05-31 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. You did an awesome job with this, I love it. Particularly the way you took the stuff from the reboot, the stuff from Duane, and melded them so flawlessly.
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[personal profile] katta 2009-05-31 08:33 am (UTC)(link)
This was very interesting, both the character aspects and the larger worldbuilding. Well done!
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[personal profile] eleanorjane 2009-05-31 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I loved this - the look at Vulcan culture from the outside, the difficulties in trying to interact with people who don't let anything escape, the fact that Kirk's doing his best anyway... great stuff!
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[personal profile] jujuberry136 2009-06-01 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hi! I found you via a friend of a friend rec and just wanted to drop you a line about how completely awesome this is. I really loved the fact that the federation is still pretty clueless about Vulcans but Jim is *trying* so hard. I love his overheard conversation (and wonder how exactly he's interpreting the veiled references to the betrothal contracts and pon farr) and that he's working on reaching out to Spock.

Hope you don't mind if I add you to my reading list!

Thanks so much for this wonderful story :D
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[personal profile] allchildren 2009-06-03 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
This is beautiful and heartbreaking, thank you.

(Anonymous) 2009-06-11 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
Mmm, beautifully done.
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[personal profile] callmesandyk 2009-06-14 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I really enjoyed this! :)

(Anonymous) 2009-06-15 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
Loved this! Very nice job conveying the alienness of Vulcan culture. I also really liked the odd relationship between Spock and Spock Prime, whom I could see doing a lot of things to pave the way for Spock. Things that Spock wouldn't realize he wanted / needed until after the fact. I can see Spock Prime living vicariously through this younger Spock, and taking a great deal of joy in watching the path he takes.

I also love the idea of T'Pau going all weak in the knees at Spock Prime. You totally know it's true...he pwns her and pretty much anyone else he wants to. Because he is. SO. AWESOME. :)

[personal profile] greek_jester 2009-06-19 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
This is lovely. I've been trying to think of how best to describe this, but all I can come up with is that they all felt so perfectly Vulcan. Everything fit so well that you can't imagine it going any other way without being completely OOC for the Vulcan race. *shrugs* Sorry, best I can come up with to describe how much I loved this fic, & it's not even coming close *sighs*

Why I am crying- with love

(Anonymous) 2009-06-21 08:03 am (UTC)(link)
1) You used Vulcan names.

2) Spock!Prime

3) Diane Duane, old skool style, baby!

4) "So think of him as a strangely prescient cousin. You're black this time."

Star Trek, The animated Series. You sly dog!

Noein9
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[personal profile] starlady 2009-06-24 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant. Utterly brilliant. Double bonus points for working in Diane Duane book canon! She wrote the book on Vulcans, literally. Actually maybe the one thing I liked best is the line about Kirk's translator and it mismatching Spock's speech.

I think I have to watch TAS now.
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[personal profile] livrelibre 2009-08-06 12:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is really excellent! I love the worldbuilding going on here.
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[personal profile] vellum 2009-08-24 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
i think i read this when you first posted it, and since then the words have rattled around in my head, like plopping rocks into a lake and the ripples reaching surrounding me, painfully. this fic is wonderful.
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[personal profile] nic 2009-09-03 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
This is just beautiful. Thank you so much - for respecting Vulcan.
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[personal profile] elanya 2009-09-03 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful! Your Vulcans have made Vik such a powerful place already.
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[personal profile] nic_fics 2009-09-22 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
That was very beautiful and moving. I love that your Vulcans talk like Vulcans, especially,

"The well weeps for those who cannot."
and
"But all your settlements are near mountains," the aid officer said.
"Only one is near this mountain," Sarek answered.
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[personal profile] chosenmortal 2009-09-23 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
god, this is beautiful. i don't even know what else to say. i love genfic and there is so much to love about this story, i'm going to have to read it a few more times to really process it all, i know. definitely going to be reccing this one in future. <3
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[personal profile] minoanmiss 2009-09-23 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
What a spectacularly excellent story.
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[personal profile] mutecornett 2009-11-13 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
♥ Oh man, I really loved this! I don't know if anyone else has made a cover, but I felt compelled to nevertheless:

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e37/mutecornett/thewordforworld2.jpg
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[identity profile] phlogistics.livejournal.com 2010-02-04 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome fic! Thanks very much for writing this. :)
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[personal profile] wildestranger 2010-03-15 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I really enjoyed this - the world you/they are building is fascinating. Also, loved the title. :)
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[personal profile] dreamlittleyo 2010-04-15 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful beautiful beautiful!!! What a lovely read, so vivid and healing and gorgeous - I loved it!

Holy cow!

(Anonymous) 2010-04-19 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
This was so good! I just wanted it to go on and on! LOVE your take on Vulcans.

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